When the door was finally open, two lovely eyes faced him . He had expected it. The fair lady took a step forward, her cheeks blushing radiantly. But the young man said,"No i do not wan to marry her! There is only one and only one person in my heart, and that is the princess." As he said this,he put his hand against his heart n looked up to the princess. The princess was touched. she looked down at him, her eyes briming with tears. but somthing else was going to happen.
"Arrest him!" the king ordered. All the guards ran forward and apprehended him. the princess kneld down in front of her father and shouted," No....No! Father please...please i beg u release him." After many pleas from the princess, the king decided to release him and decided to make him his son-in-law. the audience was happy for the both of them.
They held hand in hand as they walked down the ale towards the prist. The prist announced them husband and wife. So that ended well for both of them but the lady who was behinf the door was not happy at all. she thought to herself. one day i will have my revenge......
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I think that you have some spelling errors. Your story is quite well built but I think that you can improve on your plot. i do not think that the lady will probably be angry at the end cause she may not like the man.
ReplyDeleteThe ending was great, though you have some spelling errors. eg, you spelt "want" as "wan", "priest" as "prist" and "behind" as "behind". The way you wrote this was like chatting in MSN, you wrote "you" as "u". But still, it was a great ending.
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